<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><rss version="2.0"><channel><title>Draft &amp; Press — the desk</title><description>Pieces on B2B content: briefs, audits, distribution and honest measurement.</description><link>https://draftandpress.com/</link><language>en-us</language><item><title>I rewrote the same articles sixteen times. Line editing made them worse.</title><link>https://draftandpress.com/blog/sixteen-rewrites-what-moved/</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://draftandpress.com/blog/sixteen-rewrites-what-moved/</guid><description>I assumed word choice was what made writing read as machine-made. Sixteen scored rewrites later I do not believe it, and the ranking surprised me.</description><pubDate>Sun, 16 Aug 2026 00:00:00 GMT</pubDate><category>Editing</category><author>Ilse Brandt</author></item></channel></rss>